Amazing job with the coloring! The skin tones look so real! Great job!

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very nice. Sort of a two sides of evil thing going on here. cool.

Wow, super fast commenting! lol, thank you so much!!!! <3

Lol! They're not evil silly willy. Thank you though !

Haha of course! Anytime!

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OMG FANGASM!

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Thank... you? lallaal a

you're sooo welcome...

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Urk, sorries, I forgotted... twice! *is teh lam*

They look really good, but to poke at some things...

On the left:
On her shoulders, the line, plus the shadows seem to imply she has two collar bones, the shadow under the line should likely be removed.

The shadows under her visible armpit, and in the hollow of her elbow should also likely be deeper. And in general across the her there should prolly be more variation in the depth of shadow.

On the right:

Again likely needs a bit more variation in shadow depth, including some parts having a bit deeper shadows. Though some of the shadow spread should be lessened like on the shoulder thats faced into the light. Her breasts also seem a bit too spherical and the transition between them could likely be evened out a bit more, to prevent them seeming so seperated (it might be that the bulge of the one on the left is too large or such).

Both of them:
Only major thing I can see is that both of their muscle lines along their belly button seem very deep and very long. In general if that were to occur there would have to be a lot of muscle definition along the entire torso (like bodybuilder like) and even then, the point likely wouldn't extend so far over the pelvis.


They both look really good in general though, and you having done this with a mouse is more than a little impressive. You might have some luck using masks and multiple layers set to multiple/overlay and the eraser tool to help with controlling the size aspects, just as a thought. But yeah, they definitely look good overall to this point and sexah Keep going!

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